Friday, March 8, 2013
7 Tips To Fight the Deadly Feeling of Boredom.
The order of the article is random because it goes back and forth between different ways to make you get over being bored. The tone of the article is erudite because they say they have done a lot of research on the topic and they have a lot of information on it. The article is explaining the ways that you can get over being bored. The examples of how to do this come from different countries and from the author and other people. The title of the article says tips for fighting boredom, it gives seven tips telling how to not be bored, it gives personal experience on how to not be bored. What this article means for me is that there is ways for people to get over being bored and I might try a couple of them because I get bored easy.
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I promise I will never give you an *article* that is "random." It may include a bunch of different suggestions, but that they are all suggestions is, in itself, a pattern.
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure I agree with "erudite" either, because though they've done research, these suggestions seem to be based on persona experience, thus not...snooty.
Your supporting details also need to be DETAILS--these are far too general.
Your inferences need to take this a step further, because the article pretty clearly STATES that there are ways for people to get over being bored, so it's your job as the reader to read between the lines.